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DannyG2006
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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 10:11 am |
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Have been thinking it over and not only does my logo need revamping, my slogan does as well. How does rewording it to: "Where We Make You Feel Like A Star." sound.
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mrscott
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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 1:14 pm |
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DannyG2006 wrote: Have been thinking it over and not only does my logo need revamping, my slogan does as well. How does rewording it to: "Where We Make You Feel Like A Star." sound. Too "wordy"
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Alan B
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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 2:47 pm |
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DannyG2006 wrote: Have been thinking it over and not only does my logo need revamping, my slogan does as well. How does rewording it to: "Where We Make You Feel Like A Star." sound. Why do feel the need that you have to use one? Better without one. Especially the one you want to use. Trust me, you're not going to make anybody feel like they are a star. I would do away with the tag line.
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GK Productions
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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 4:24 pm |
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mrscott wrote: DannyG2006 wrote: Have been thinking it over and not only does my logo need revamping, my slogan does as well. How does rewording it to: "Where We Make You Feel Like A Star." sound. Too "wordy" I have to agree...not always do you need a slogan...sometimes it just gets over looked...sometimes less is more...I had a slogan at one time " Connection to todays hots hits" but everyone already know I keep up on the new music....so it a waste of space putting it on there...again less is more...IMO
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Paradigm Karaoke
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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 10:52 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:24 pm Posts: 5106 Location: Phoenix Az Been Liked: 1279 times
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Not trying to piss on your thoughts, but it is a line that everyone uses. It's just become cliche and doesn't stand out at all anymore.
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Alan B
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2020 8:22 am |
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Danny, I wouldn't use a tag line. I don't think it's necessary. However, if you must use one, I wouldn't say anything about being a star... either making or feeling. Try something like this:
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Earl
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Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2020 9:46 am |
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Absolutely First Class Alan. That is one very classy design.
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Paradigm Karaoke
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Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2020 2:42 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:24 pm Posts: 5106 Location: Phoenix Az Been Liked: 1279 times
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Alan B wrote: Danny, I wouldn't use a tag line. I don't think it's necessary. However, if you must use one, I wouldn't say anything about being a star... either making or feeling. Try something like this: this one is really slick Alan. nice job
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